高考英语书面表达之我见

多年来，高考英语书面表达对我们农村普通高中学生而言一直是个老大难的问题。同学们在写作时会遇到很多问题，面对这一现象，教师应采取各种灵活多样的方法，及时提高学生的写作能力。在我的教学工作中我是这样做的，对于提高学生写作有一定的帮助。

1. 结合实际加强背诵。

2. 记住常用的句型，如写信用语，记叙文中使用at first，then later，finally;说明文中使用first、Second、 last but not least.议论文中使用I don't.....、I believe等连接词.

3. 五个基本句型要求。

主语加谓语：the story happened yesterday.

主语加谓语加宾语：they study English.

主语加系动词加表语：they are from China.

主语加谓语加宾语加宾语补足语：She made Tom stand there.

主语加谓语加双宾语：I gave it Tom a book。

4. 语法的整准确。

5. 使用连接词，比如：in my opinion，as far as I know to begin with what's more，on the contrary in general等等。下面以建议信的写法为例：

建议信一般属于半开放性作文，大多要求我们根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理建议。写作时要注意：

1．建议信的语言

（1）建议信除要遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对别人的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法。因此，陈述建议的语言必须中肯，在劝说对方接受自己的建议时，应该特别注意措辞。

(2)陈述建议必须具有说服性：在向对方表明你的建议时，如果对方觉得你的建议是违背常理的，那么你的建议也就失去了意义。所以，要想提出好建议，必须具有充分的理由，展示出自己独特的见解。

(3)适当运用虚拟句“if I were you ...”表述自己的建议，使用高级句式。

2．建议信的结构

建议信一般采取“三段式结构”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin with, then, later等依次陈述建议。

(1)首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由，简单介绍自己的观点，注意语气。

(2)主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。

(3)结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意表达方式，使对方容易接受。

 黄金表达：

1．建议信的开头常用句式

①I am writing to express my views concerning ...

②You have asked me for my advice on ...and I will try to make some suggestions.

③Thanks for trusting me. Regarding ..., I’ d like to make some suggestions.

2．表达建议的常用句式

①I feel that it would be beneficial if ...

②I would like to suggest that ...

③I would recommend that ...

④If I were you, I would ...

⑤You may consider doing ...

⑥It would seem to me that you could ...

⑦As you may agree that ...

⑧As far as I am concerned .../In my opinion .../As for me ...

3．建议信的结尾常用句式

①I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.

②I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.

③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.

④Should you have any more problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.

⑤I’ m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need.

范文赏析：

Dear Committee members，

I wish to make a suggestion about starting a school art gallery, which I think will appeal to a number of students in our school.

There are many students who have a preference for painting in our school. The school art gallery can provide these students with a very good platform to display their own paintings, and through the art gallery, other students may not only get a chance to admire the artistic achievements and the development of school culture but also can widen their knowledge. If you were to offer such an opportunity to the students who are fond of art, I believe the art exhibition would work out well.

I would be more than happy if my suggestion could be adopted.

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua