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发布者:赖曼玲     发布时间:2019-06-06 浏览数( 0) 【举报】

一、书信的类型

1:投诉信      2:询问信     3:求助信        4:道歉信       5:感谢信      

6:建议信      7:求职信     8:邀请信        9:申请信 10:告知信

二、书信写作的五点要求:

1、开门见山说意图        2、咨询/ 建议123     3、不同内容可分段        

4、感谢客气不可少                   5、期待回信成老套

三、句型

开头语和结束语

1、投诉信

投诉信的开头常用句式和套话  

I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your …

投诉信的结尾常用句式和套话  

I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.

  I would like to have this matter settled by the end of …

2、询问信

  询问信的开头常用句式和套话

  I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning …

  I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding …

询问信的结尾常用句式和套话  

Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.

  I am looking forward to hearing from you.

3、求助信

  请求信的开头常用句式和套话  I am writing to seek for your assistance in …

  请求信的结尾常用句式和套话  I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.

4、道歉信

  道歉信的开头常用句式和套话  I am writing to apologize for …  

I am writing to say sorry for …

  道歉信的结尾常用句式和套话

  I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.

5、感谢信

  感谢信的开头常用句式和套话  I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for …

  感谢信的结尾常用句式和套话  I must thank you again for your generous help.

6、建议信

  建议信的开头常用句式和套话

  Knowing that..., I am writing to express my views concerning …

  You have asked me for my advice with regard to … and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.

  表达建议常用句式和套话          I feel that it would be beneficial if …

  I would like to suggest that …        I would recommend that …

  If I were youI would …          You may consider doing …

建议信的结尾常用句式和套话    I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.


 7、求职信

  求职信的开头常用句式和套话

  Knowing that..., I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress …

  求职信的结尾常用句式和套话

  Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you.

If you n

eed to know more about meplease contact me at …

 8、邀请信

邀请信的开头常用句式和套话  

I am writing to invite you to …I wonder if you could come …

  邀请信的结尾常用句式和套话

  My family and I would feel honored if you could come.

  We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.

 9、申请信

 申请信的开头常用句式和套话

 I am extremely pleased to hear from you for the position in…, I am writing to apply for the

 job/position/opportunity/chance.

 I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for the position in…, I am writing to apply for the

 job/position/opportunity/chance.

 申请信的结尾常用句式和套话

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.

I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

 10、告知信

 告知信的开头常用句式和套话

 Knowing that..., I am writing to inform/tell you something relevant.

 申请信的结尾常用句式和套话

 Hopefully, the information above would be helpful for you. I do hope that you can .... Looking forward to    

 your reply. Thank you for reading my letter.

²   寻找失物信

  寻找失物信的开头常用句式和套话

  I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for me to have my camera back.

寻找失物信的结尾常用句式和套话 

I would really appreciate it if you could …

²   推荐信

  推荐信的开头常用句式和套话

  I would like to present … for your consideration in your search for a qualified manager.

  With reference to your requirementsI shallwithout reservationrecommend … as an ideal candidate.

  推荐信的结尾常用句式和套话

  ThereforeI don't hesitate to recommend … as the right person for your consideration.

  Any favorable consideration to this letter would be considered a personal favor.


四、书信类模板

1:投诉信

Dear_______,

  I am ______ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

  I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限).

  Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

2:询问信

Dear ___________,

  I am ____________ (自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)

  First of all, what are ____________________?(第一个问题) Secondly, when will___________________?(第二个问题) Thirdly, is __________?(第三个问题)

  I would also like to inquire ________(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?

  Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

3:请求信

Dear___________,

  I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)

 The reason for_____ is that______(给出原因).I_____, so I_____(给出细节)

I would also like to request______(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.

  Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at _______(电话号码).I look forward to a favorable reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

4:道歉信

Dear ___________,

  I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).

  The reason is that_(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

5:感谢信

Dear___________,

  I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _________ (感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in _________ (对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_______(没有对方帮助时的后果).

  Every one agrees that it was you who___________(给出细节).Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua


6:建议信

Dear ___________,

  You have asked me for my advice with regard to __, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ____(建议的内容)

I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

7:求职信

Dear ___________

  I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____(报纸名称)of____(广告发布时间).

  Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a_____(工作名称). In the one hand,______(第一个原因). On the other hand, _______(另一个原因).

  Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________(电话号码)

  Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

8:邀请信

Dear___________,

  There will a ____(内容) at/in_____ (地点) on___ (时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间). This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排). At around______(时间)_______________(另一个安排)

I really hope you can make it. Looking forward to your reply before ___________(通知你的最后期限)

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

9:申请信

Dear ___________,

  I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in ___(内容).And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.

  I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, ___________(原因1. On the other hand, _________(原因2 .I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.

  I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

  Sincerely yours,

  Li Hua

10:告知信

Dear ___________,

Knowing that..., I am writing to inform/tell you something relevant. Recently, our school needs___________(具体内容).

Here are some details about it. To begin with, you        (第一点要求/定语从句,). What’s more,        (第二点要求/there be 句型) . Last but not least        (第三点要求/非谓语用法) .

   Hopefully, the information above would be helpful for you. I do hope that you can .... Looking forward to    your reply. Thank you for reading my letter.

 Sincerely yours,

  Li Hua


高考英语作文评分标准

1本体总分为25分,按5个档次给分。

2评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

3词数少于或多余要求字数的,从总分中减去2

4评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点,应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性

5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英,美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

7内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

{各档次的给分范围和要求}

第五档(很好);(21-25分)

1完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2覆盖所有内容要点。

3应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4语法或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或词汇所致。具备较强的语言运用能力。

5有效地使用了语句间的成份,使全文结构紧凑

6完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(好);(16-20分)

1完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。

3运用的语法结构或词汇方面能满足任务的要求。

4语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。

5应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

6达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(适当);(11-15分)

1基本完成了试题规定的任务。

2虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。

3应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。

5应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。

6整体而言,基本达到了语气的写作目的。

第二档(较差);(6-10分)

1未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

2漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。

3词法结构单调,词汇项目有限。

4有一些语法结构词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。

5较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。

6信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档();(1-5分)

1未完成试题规定的任务。

2明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。

3语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。

4较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。

5缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。

6信息未能传达给读者。

不得分(0分)

未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判,写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

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